Thought-Provoking
I've watched your cartoon three times now and I still don't know what to think about it. For one thing, I didn't think the sound was that bad at all. But the graphics... For a beginner I consider it extremely good... But the PLOT and STORY were amazingly dry. I'm sorry, this was very very dull. The jokes were just plain horrid and not funny. But I have to respect you for trying. Because you did do good, there just needs to be much better writing. And yeah, Brad does sound like hes twelve... You should find another actor for him. And I don't want to sound redundant to all the other comments (I've read them all) But yeah, the begining and distraction scenes were unbearably and painfully long. The begining promoted to me a big half-hour hit show, which of course it isn't. I think you were trying to make it cool to hard. Dramatically shorten the begining. I want to talk to you because this really does fasinate me. Last point- Keep it up man but write better.