I loved this.
I don't really agree with the message but the animation itself was awesome. The music fit really well, and your drawn images in this were really good so I don't see what you'd need to be using sprites for anyway? I give this 4/5
I loved this.
I don't really agree with the message but the animation itself was awesome. The music fit really well, and your drawn images in this were really good so I don't see what you'd need to be using sprites for anyway? I give this 4/5
realy? I thought my drawings were shit
Pointless
There are so many of these and none of them really vary. You could make it alot better if you had some kind of plot or story rather than just sprites fighting, because we've all seen that oh so many times. I give it 2/5
Under-rated
That was actually pretty cool in it's own way. One problem though is I think it's the most 2D thing I've ever seen in my life. The music was pretty well written for doing them yourself, the plot was a little dry but not bad. The beginning was funny though. The graphics could be way better yes, and possibly have more than 2 frames for when hes talking. But it really wasn't all that bad.
In poor taste,
I don't really know what else I could say. It just didn't seem like much time at all was put into this and the punchline along with the joke was not that funny. The graphics were pretty good but could be better. 2/5
Some Kind of Trip Man
That was freakin awesome. It synched very very well to a great song.
thanx...
Umm... Well...
I think you should try harder next time. I mean, I'm not saying this is bad but theres great room for improvement. For one thing the audio, it was clear, like you could understand it and all, but it was very quiet. Another thing is I didn't find the plot to amusing. Maybe just turn the noise up and write a better/funnier script and your set to go!
I had a script?
Liked
It was unique! One of the best Mario flashes I've ever seen. I mainly liked it because you actually put your time and effort into ANIMATING it. It wouldn't have been half as funny if sprites had been used. So cheers, to a great toon!
Not to Bad
Is this your first flash? It's really not all THAT bad, as I can see you did put at least more than an hour in this, which alot of people don't. To be a constructive critism this is what I'll tell you: Next time DO NOT make the voices squeaky. People hate that here, and I couldn't even understand what he was saying. Also, try not using completely solid colors on everything. Mix em' up! Good luck with future projects, I protected this entry, but only by a hair.
if you hate the squeaky voices, whatever, thats your opinion, some other people are fine with it as long as they can understand it, which is kind of hard to do with my sound recorder, because it cant do much, but I'm working on it. And no, this is not my first animation because this is ep. 3 (emphasis on 3) but it might seem like it because I am 13 and therefore, my motor skills aren't fully developed and just one more thing, sorry if I seemed like quite an asshole in this review, its just that I'm not in a very good mood today.
Richard Simmons?
Pretty good man. I noticed the lip synch was a little bit off on the dog however. Also, when he was hitting the bong, he didn't use any kind of fire on the weed. See the way I've always done, is by using Fire on the weed. But either way, your toon, and a pretty good one too. The voices were very clear which is rare.
Oh, it'll happen man. Just wait.
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