I loved it!!
That was AWESOME, don't listen to TheDevilMyself I know him, hes kind of a perfectionists. But your little imperfections didn't even matter cause this cartoon pwned. I love the style of scanning pencil on notebook paper. I've, in alot of my toons scanned watercolor paintings I made. Check out my "everything is a balloon", it kinda reminded me of this. Anyway, awesome style, I was a little disappointed at first because I thought it was a loop but than it transfered into awesome. I'm putting this in my favorites for sure. 5/5!!