I liked it.
This cartoon was the shit! I'm guessing it was your first one since it had a lot of major flaws but I gave you a 5/5 because to me it looks like you put some serious effort into this. I've never seen a rip off of 24 before (nor have I watched it) but this is the only cartoon of its kind! The sprites were done pretty well for what I'm assuming is a beginner (correct me if I'm wrong). But as for your drawing, it was anything but top of the line. Newgrounds has some GREAT tutorials on drawing though and I think if you invested an hour or two into that and used your original type ideas like this you could make one kick ass flash!